brick haiku

Here are all the entries to the brick haiku contest (see below for more information).

August 17
Announcing the *winners* of the brick haiku contest!

Guest Critics:
Kirk (site) awards a brick to Judith.

Paula gives the Toblerone Bricks of Merit to JWGH, Charles, and to David's near-haiku.

The Garner Prize, from Melissa, goes to Bryce.

And the Moonmilk Bricks are awarded to Mary, Brian, and Uncle Aussie.

Thanks to the guest critics for contributing to the cause of ground-level haiku and for helping to raise $240 for the Friends of Garner State Park!


Note to the haiku authors: let me know how you would like to be credited here: full name? Email address? Web link? Write ranjit (@) moonmilk.com

A dentist hears
AhAhAhAhAhAhAHHH
Gimme novocaine!
         --LAN3

AbrickinTexas
OwowOwOWowOWow
donottreadonme
         --LAN3

AbrickinTexas
OhohohOHohOHoh
Step on me hon
         --LAN3

Vowel reunion
A E I O U, and Y
Can we get along
         --LAN3

GarnerBricksTalk
AU! RU a Brick2?
WeCarryAllFeet
         --LAN3

FriendsOfGarner
ILove2Haiku4U
Walk on my poem
         --LAN3

grandarmyplaza
bocbockockadoodl
aroosterwakesme
         --LAN3

Brickornot2Brick
ApalofGarneramI
Donottreadonme.
         --LAN3



H2O comes down
& H2O damages
&so we rebuild
         --JWGH

Y's world in luv
Y R we marching
Brand new record
         --JWGH

Stony ruby box
Overpowers H2O
to save a park
         --JWGH

furious winter
agitated folio
remedy settled
  --Bryce Utting

riotous rainfall
poetry dedicated
Garner unflooded
  --Bryce Utting

Curiosity
Also spontaneity
Overrated, no?
  --David Pacheco

Allah qazuul-a
Mente Kabul abibi
ti boppiti boo!
  --David Pacheco

Chili BBQ
PepperyFantasia
RibStickingTasty
  --Linda

um um um um um
haiku 14, 16 um
um um um um um
  --Linda

BunsButt&Fanny
MyGluteusMaximus
It's whatIsit on
  --Linda

Ode to helium:
unsinkable iota
flotation vapor
  --Mary Lucking

Long ago on a
hippopotamus Eva
entered Nirvana
  --Mary Lucking

San Antonio,
TX precipitation
saturated earth
  --Mary Lucking

Constantinople?
City eradicated
before Istanbul.
  --Brian Chase

Use trepanation?
Acetamidophenol
is not so messy.
  --Brian Chase

Slimy flagella!
Amoeba & amoeba
Pseudopodia!
  --Brian Chase

Waving flagella!
Amoeba & amoeba
Go pseudopod go!
  --Brian Chase

Proud Fortunato
Vino amontillado
Vengeful masonry
  --Brian Chase



not quite haiku
I dreamt I was
a brick and I...
AAAAAAAAAAAAH!!
  --David Pacheco

All in all just
another brick
in the floor
  --David Pacheco



Rio Frio flood
A new Oceania
In Texas style
         --BR

Alas awfully
Fits 7 into 14
Was many a try
         --KPD

Immortalized in
A parallelopiped
A haiku lego!
  --Stephen Tanner
dumplechan (@)hotmail.com

kibological
memorial dialog:
beable wox wox
         --JWGH

kibologists, we
unite&Dmand u 2
Free Jo eBay now
         --JWGH

Kibologists say:
YHBT. YHL.
Have a nifty day
         --JWGH

Inimical flood
watery Krakatoa
nature unopposed
         --rone

ThreeLinesOf14
5-7-5Syllables
EnoughForHaiku
         --rone

cantilevering
possibility into
precariousness
       --Judith

Futility is
idealisticism
uncontradicted
--Charles Lucking

Pebble seventy
situated idea,
upon a garden.
--Charles Lucking

Weary sycamore
Septuagenarian
Capitulating.
--Charles Lucking

spring lizard
vivid red dewlap
love balloons
  --Uncle Aussie

Creepity crawly
Any herpetofauna
49 species!
  --Uncle Aussie

Flooding&ebbing
Anti-Diluvianist
BuilderRebuilder
  --Linda

14 characters
a poetic mania
1 awful haiku
         --E

moonmilk haiku brick contest! July 10 - August 8

Garner State Park was damaged by floods! But the Friends of Garner will help them rebuild. And we can help support the Friends of Garner by sponsoring a monogrammed brick for the entrance plaza.
(7 5/8" x 3 5/8" x 2 1/4")
3/4" letters - 3 lines per brick
(Up to 14 letters/spaces per line)
5/8" letters - 4 lines per brick
(Up to 16 letters/spaces per brick)
Three lines of 14 characters: with great care, that is enough for a haiku. But use 16 characters if you must. Please send your haiku to me: ranjit, at (@) moonmilk.com, before August 8, 3:15 PM EDT (the new moon). Moonmilk will choose at least one and perhaps more than one haiku, and pay the sponsorship fees to have them permanently enshrined at Garner State Park. Yes! Your haiku, on a brick!
All haiku submissions will remain the property of the submitters, but entry implies permission to engrave your haiku on a brick in Texas, and to display it proudly on this web site. That's 16 characters per line including spaces, folks. Moonmilk is not associated with Garner State Park or the Friends of Garner. In fact, Moonmilk has never been to Garner State Park, or to Texas, for that matter; however, if opportunity arises, an inspection mission to Garner State Park will be arranged during SIGGRAPH 2002. We do have a friend named Garner.

 

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